Anime Kanarazu

I'll throw up some random sketches here. If anyone wants to critique then feel free!

Its a nice sketch. I want to see it when it gets finished.

While this one is being inked, I finally finished the Ami picture! She made me turn it into a Captains themed image so this is what I came up with:

It's still kinda WIP so that's why I am putting it here.

Want me to pick it apart? There's a few places I see that need some touch ups.

Yeah, though one thing I do know that I am going to add to is the lines. They are weak at best. But other than that, what can I work on?

Biggest thing that sticks out is to make sure you clean up the lines. Even though they've been refined some most of them still look kind of sketchy, but I can assume you'll fix that in the inking so I digress just thought I should point it out.

The mouth and/or nose seems a bit low. That's partially due to the top-down view, but you overdid it just a little.

The right breast (image-right) is a good lot smaller than the left one. Arm up, arm down is part of why this happened, but same as before, you overdid it just a little I think.

Most of the other stuff is things that should be fixed when you clean up the lines (end of the tail is a little flat, the left boot heel is... overextended I guess, can't quite put my finger on that one).

Good start, just needs some work in a few places, primarily mistakes I haven't seen you make in awhile so it can probably be attributed to being rusty.